Once there was a Corgi. He was named Pickles because his favorite snack was pickles. He lived in Buckingham Palace in London, England. He lived with the Queen of England. The Queen had 37 Corgis. But Pickles was her least favorite Corgi because he was one of the naughtiest. He was black and brown and he had long hair. He barked at the cook, the gardener, the Queen, his mom and his dad.
He was very evil. He stole all of the pickles from the royal kitchen. He dug huge holes in the royal garden. He also chewed on the royal crown! He kicked other corgis off of the couch if he wanted to sleep there.
Pickles wanted to get all of the dill pickles in the world and he needed 5,108,932 Corgis of the world to help him. So he left the Queen’s palace and built a secret lair. Meanwhile…
“Where is pickles?” said a Corgi.
“I don't know” said a different Corgi.
Back in his secret lair Pickles built a giant hypnotizing machine.
“I will use this to hypnotize all of the Corgis” said Pickles. He named it the Pickles3000™. It was 5 ft tall and 2 ft wide. It was going to make them get all of the pickles in England. They gathered the pickles from grocery stores, homes and restaurants. Then Pickles went to the palace.
“Yay you’re back!” the Corgis screamed sarcastically. “Where were you?” He puIIed out the hypnotizing machine and zapped all the Corgis.
“Oh no!” one of the Corgis shouted. Then they got hypnotized. He commanded all the Corgis to get all the pickles in England. They said “Sure we will try.”
“Great!” Pickles whispered to himself. “The Pickles3000™ is working!” Then the palace Corgis left to search for the pickles. One group invaded the town and got 12,342. Another group attacked a store and got 13,986 pickles. The final group of Corgis went to a restaurant and got 0.1 pickles because they only found the one pickle slice in a burger! Then they came back to the palace. Then Pickles brought all of the pickles to the hypnotizing machine. The machine transformed the pickles into Hypnopickles™. Any Corgi that ate Hypnopickles™ got hypnotized.
Once all the pickles were transformed, Pickles commanded the palace Corgis to make all the Corgis in the world eat Hypnopickles™. Right away the palace Corgis went all over the world. They went to Asia and South America and North America and Australia and Europe and Antarctica and convinced all the Corgis in the world to eat the pickles.
5 years later, when all the Corgis were hypnotized, Pickles commanded them all to come back to England. Then at the palace he told them all to get all the pickles in the world from their own countries and bring them back to the palace. One by one the hypnotized Corgis went to their countries to get pickles. They got pickles from many places like Mexico, France, South Africa, South Dakota, North Dakota, Jamaica, El Salvador, Japan, and many, many, many, many, many more places. To get back to the royal palace from all of the countries, they snuck into people's suitcases to get back with all the pickles in the world. Then Pickles counted them. There were 1,456,798 jars of pickles. Pickles was happy!!!! He wagged his tail.
The next thing Pickles had to do was hide all of the jars. Then he ran down to his secret lair and hid all the pickles. In order to set the Corgis of the world free, Pickles ate one of the hypnotized dill pickles to break the spell. He ate a pickle and the hypnotized Corgis woke up. They went into people's suitcases in order to sneak back to their home countries. Pickles was happy because whenever he wanted a pickle he just had to go to his secret lair to get one. The Queen liked him a little bit more because he wasn’t stealing the pickles from the royal fridge anymore!
THE END
This is very descriptive! I can visualize it!!